I think you could do better in the first drop, it's just to empty. the melody is nice. the kick is too bouncy, but i couldn't call it hard kick. that's more to the New Style.

Not that "Hardstyle" as i expected.

But here is what i think.

1. I don't really enjoy the whole concept of the song. maybe because the Lead is louder than another lead which is quite annoying

2. I don't sense any kind of "Mastering". The kick is weak, i don't get the sense of any hard influence. and that KSHMR Exhaust is too loud as well

3. The Mixdown are quite weird, i don't get the tension on the predrop. try to fix the detuned lead